You're 15? Holy shit, there's more story and humanity and humor to this than most cartoons put on the frontpage. I hope you keep working on the fundamentals and your animation, because you only have to go up from here.
You're 15? Holy shit, there's more story and humanity and humor to this than most cartoons put on the frontpage. I hope you keep working on the fundamentals and your animation, because you only have to go up from here.
Cool concept, well executed.
I'm not a fan of the music, but the animation is cool.
better overall quality than I expected, and an interesting idea--using generic sound files in flash to make something creative. There were some selected that failed, but I really enjoyed Jeinu's and MasterAadvark's stuff. I'm glad this Flash introduced me to their stuff.
The animation is weak but I liked the message, I like how some of the top flash contributers fall under your critique.
it's coo
Look I was about to give this five stars just from the thumbnail image, I like the detail there. its gross. it's cool. The animation here is well done, BUT, this computer..this comp that can run Crysis on high, cant run this cartoon smoothly. Again, its a minor mistake, but it really, really undermines your audience's patience. Please use the forums or your friends to check this sort of thing over. Thanks.
Not all that funny to me, but I like some of the animations and the general pacing. Maybe you can find a writer and some voice talents? Your talent obviously will be able to attract talented guys here.
While I didn't write this, I usually prefer to write my own scripts/storyboards for my movies, because I feel that the writing is more important than the animation. And I like finding voice talents, but I just thought it wasn't necessary for this video. Still, I do appreciate the input.
I was going to give you a 2.5, but upped it to a three because I noticed the description and the reaction to said description. You really put yourself out there, and I dont agree with anything you wrote, but it takes some balls to put this out on NEWGROUNDS, a site whose mascot killed maniacal students in a elementary school. That is, its hard to offend people here with shock and cursing, so why not go for God and sweetness? Great trolling.
nice! xD
thanks!
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